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Re: The Girl On the Pond - A fairy tale.
This is a little fairy tale I wrote. I'd like to know what you guys think of it, please. Also, it's shorter than it looks. :D -Esther Once upon a ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Under the skin.
Hello Piano. I am Esther and I will be reviewing you today. So, I get the feeling that you are trying to sound poetic and intellegent here. Sometimes you succeed ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Hey Kids.
Weclome to YWS, fiction! I'm Esther, it's a pleasure to see that you've found our nice little writing site. Mostly, everyone here is polite and friendly. Courtesy is required on ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Casting the Crown, Ch. 1 (final revision for now)
Hey firefly! Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I've had a busy week. This is a very solid story here. I enjoyed it quite a lot. ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Newbie In Town!
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! It's great here, I promise. I have a thing for anime too. May I ask what anime the image of your avatar is from? Or ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Fledgling: a Short Story Pt. 1/2
Thanks, Ultra. Read the rest of the story to see, Stori. ;)
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Fledgling: a Short Story, Pt. 2/2
This is the second part of my story for Durrie's contest. If you took the time to read the first part, thanks. They learned that griffins had different colorations depending ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Fledgling: a Short Story Pt. 1/2
This is the first part of a short story that I wrote for Durriedog's contest. Reviews are appreciated. Through the forest a small bird took flight, feeling the sun on ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: The Stuggles of Antier - Part II
Hey Squirrely! I'm glad to see that you got your second part up. I've been wanting to read it for quite some time now. I liked this better than first ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: Crashing Down - Chapter 3
Hey Wario, how good it is to be reviewing your work again. I think it's going to be a long review so sit tight! This was great. It kept my ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: Errmm...Hey Guys!
Hey Rebel! Welcome to YWS. I'm Esther, and it's great to meet you. I'm pretty sure every writer has difficulty sticking to their works sometimes. Remember, the joy of finishing ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: A Confusing Case, Pt. 1(working title)
Hi there! I shall be reviewing you today. Now, I love Psych. It's like my favorite TV show. The thing about fanfiction is that it's all about the writers making ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: O_o.....hi??
Hey Mockingbird! Hahahaa....Our interests are one in the same. To Kill a Mockingbird is one of my favorite books, and Lord of the Rings rocks my socks! Love your avatar. ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Borias and a nasty pirate
Hey there! First off, this was a very random piece so it was hard to take (and review) it seriously. And although it has laughing value, this doesn't have any ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Hi I'm New! :)
Welcome to YWS! Well...you are the second most confident person I've met here on YWS. That's good, I think. Just don't make people feel bad about your awesomeness. ;) I ...
Jul 18, 2010
